Talk:Chandler Burr
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[edit] Scientific data concluding that...
'Some Christians were offended by the book's title (it comes from a Charles Darwin quote stating that the evolutionary evidence shows human beings are not the result of a separate act of divine creation but an animal species like all others) and by its contents, which outline scientific data concluding that homosexuality is inborn and innate.'
The last part of that sentence is misleadingly written, and needs to be changed. 'Scientific data' cannot 'conclude' anything. People conclude things, sometimes by referring to scientific data.
(By the way, I note that this article has been previously edited by someone using the name 'chandlerburr.' That does rather raise one's eyebrows, because it makes it sound - rightly or wrongly - as though someone has edited an article about himself. 'Chandlerburr' might want to see this: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Conflict_of_interest)

