Talk:Carmel Pak U Secondary School

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[edit] Tone, Notability and Reference tags

I have tagged the page for having no references. Also the inclusion of phrases such as "noble aims" is unencyclopedic, so it needs a general copyedit/cleanup (presently it seems to me to be bordering on advertising).

From the results given relative to other HK schools I guess that the school is notable, but that hasn't been explicitly established. Are there famous alumni, or has it been cited as an exemplary school? TrulyBlue (talk) 17:10, 28 January 2008 (UTC)

This school isn't "notable" but it is the best in the area and receives more government funding than other schools. It is some kind of elite school, perhaps. Heck, I thought of applying to this school like 10 years ago. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 59.149.193.70 (talk) 21:39, 8 February 2008 (UTC)