Talk:Cê

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[edit] GA Review

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• The non-inline cited reference at the bottom could go in its own section... perhaps have a ==References==, and then a ===Works cited=== and ===Footnotes=== or something like that...
  • Split into ==Footnotes== and ==References==.
• I suck at writing leads. Have you tried to improve it since I worked on it?
  • Seems pretty good to me...aren't you supposed to give me constructive criticism? :) Seriously, though, all I've changed is the sentence about critical commentary.
    • Bah, I like reminding myself of my limits. dihydrogen monoxide (H₂O) 00:58, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
• "When he writes lyrics, Veloso typically uses the word você, but sings cê" - might want to make it more clear that he writes você by says cê (am I right?)... it's a bit awkward for now
  • Smoothed out a bit, I think.
• "However, the inspiration for the album's title came when the musician physically wrote cê instead" - The however seems out of place, and this is a bit awkward in general...
  • See above.
• "from nearly every critic reviewing it" - you only cite... two reviews, so it's a bit weird to say this...
  • Ping? dihydrogen monoxide (H₂O) 00:58, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
    • See below. --Kakofonous (talk) 01:05, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
• Could you use some more reviews from here? Even small snippets from stuff not linked would be cool, I guess... to give some more variety
  • Took another New York Times review, plus Stylus Magazine and The Village Voice. That enough? :) --Kakofonous (talk) 22:14, 28 May 2008 (UTC)

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Please leave a note on my talk page when you're done with these comments. Cheers, dihydrogen monoxide (H₂O) 12:02, 28 May 2008 (UTC)

All looks good, so passed. dihydrogen monoxide (H₂O) 01:22, 29 May 2008 (UTC)