User talk:BustaJust

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[edit] Liquid Agency

Thanks for your note. The overarching reason for deleting the page is that it was not written in an encyclopedic tone but rather as an advertisement. For example it was written in the first person ("We work with...") and contains too much self-promotional wording. Your company may well merit an article in Wikipedia but it has to be written in an encyclopedic manner. A good rule of thumb is that PR material -- indeed, any materials written by anyone in your PR department -- will be unsuitable for Wikipedia. Best to have the article written by someone in your technical department who does not instinctively use PR-type language. Please see guidelines for businesses interested in Wikipedia given here where you will find advice on how to construct a suitable article (see especially the last section of that page). Again, thanks for your interest and let me know if you have other questions. Raymond Arritt 13:21, 19 September 2007 (UTC)

Raymond-

I have updated the page and have had it re-written. Please let me know if this is now ok, or if there are some changes you would like to see made. Thank again for you help and time.

[edit] 26 September

Notes have been left on talk page of Liquid Agency. Onnaghar ^{talk ! ctrb} 16:45, 26 September 2007 (UTC)