Talk:Broadway United Church of Christ

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The intro is too flowery and it scans like an essay, not like an encyclopedia entry. Figured the discussion could use a starting point. Twilytgardnfaery 14:16, 10 September 2007 (UTC)

[edit] "someone with no relation to the church and no knowledge of who we are"

Welcome to Wikipedia - where anyone can edit.Brian0324 17:40, 24 September 2007 (UTC)