Talk:Bricker Amendment

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[edit] Copyedit request

I put this on the copy-edit request page because it really needs another set of eyes to go over it; I've been looking at it too long and may be missing problems. PedanticallySpeaking 16:12, 1 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Clarification

"The best-known version of the Bricker Amendment, considered by the Senate in 1953–1954, declared that no treaty could be made by the United States that conflicted with the Constitution, was self-executing without the passage of separate enabling legislation through Congress, or which granted Congress legislative powers beyond those specified in the Constitution."

I am working on what 'self-executing' is supposed to mean; I am guesing that "no treaty could be made ... that ... was self-executing" means that no treaty could be made without enabling legislation. Is this redundant or am I mistaken? --Matthew 03:19, 7 July 2006 (UTC)

Right, self-executing means that if the Senate ratifies a treaty it is the internal law of the United States and another law passed by both houses and signed by the president is not necessary. PedanticallySpeaking 16:36, 14 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Spelling in quotes

Someone else mentioned spelling errors in quotes... guess they need 'sic' or corrected to what they really were. Watch for "slure" ... should maybe be slur?

First one: Patrick J. Buchanan writes "the term is a dismissive slure on a tradition of U.S. independence in foreign policy and nonintervention in foreign wars"

In the next sentence or so, it happens to be spelled Bucanan. I think it is Buchanan, but can imagine it being Bucanan. --Matthew 17:32, 7 July 2006 (UTC)

Both are typos. The word should have been "slur" and the name "Buchanan". PedanticallySpeaking 16:38, 14 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Problem sentences

there are some sentences that are a bit problematic, but I can't figure a way to rephrase them now. To get help with them (or allow myself to look at them later), I will just list them here until they are fixed.

  • Years later, in 1976, Senator Bricker referred to the "one world" movement advocated by Wendell Willkie, the Republican nominee against Roosevelt in the 1940 election, and others as attempting to use treaties to undermine American liberties. --Matthew 03:17, 12 July 2006 (UTC)
I've modified that sentence. PedanticallySpeaking 16:37, 14 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Used in Colleges and Law Schools

Professor Bertram Brown of the Chicago-Kent College of Law is using a prior version of this article in his class. See here and here. PedanticallySpeaking 17:08, 14 July 2006 (UTC)

Professor Thomas O'Connor of Austin Peay State University in Tennessee is using the article too. See here. PedanticallySpeaking 17:21, 14 July 2006 (UTC)

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[edit] Text of the amendment?

Most articles on US constitutional amendments include the full text of the amendment. That's the first thing I looked for in this one after reading the lead section -- why isn't it given? I understand that the amendment was proposed in various forms and none of them actually passed, but that's no reason not to give some form of it -- say the one that came one vote short of passing in the Senate. If it's very long, then at least give some key part of this, or say it's too long to quote on full.

207.176.159.90 02:14, 28 October 2006 (UTC)

The article used to have a header "For the texts of proposals, see Texts of the Bricker Amendment"; but the link and article both disappeared several revisions ago. I've recreated the article; is there any reason I shouldn't restore the link?--Orange Mike 02:45, 28 October 2006 (UTC)
They were moved to wikisource where they properly belong. Raul654 15:59, 28 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Changes to images

It is nice that the images are not all on the right side, now; I suspect it would be best to follow some pattern other than making images trade from left to right and back all the way up and down the page. Anyone better with arranging images on the page willing to make the imges change sides in a less regular manner... with an eye to making it look better? --Matthew K 20:34, 31 October 2006 (UTC)