Talk:Bradshaw Mountains/Comments

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A good start on the article but requires these improvements before upgrading to B:

  • more details are required in many of the sections.
  • The opening sentence is rather long. The naming of the range should be in a separate sentence with more details.
  • Who were Isaac and William Bradshaw and what contribution did they make that caused the range to be named after them?
  • Who/what was the Walker party mentioned in the History section?
  • What reference is used for the length/width of the range?

RedWolf (talk) 17:22, 24 November 2007 (UTC)