Talk:Blackhawk Network

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[edit] Copyedit

  • Changed "and" to a comma in first paragraph for ease of reading
  • Changed "Blackhawk also is in the process of phasing an ACH..." to "Blackhawk is also in the process of phasing in an ACH..." in first paragraph
  • Changed "roll out to" to "extend this" in first paragraph
  • Changed "which accepts" to "that accepts" in Prepayed Credit/Debit section
  • Changed "with just using your credit card" to "by just using your credit card" in DVD Play section
  • Changed "allow" to "allows" in DVD Play section
  • Removed "Fast Forward" section as it contained no information

I think this article needs to be looked at by somebody involved with the company to give a better explanation of the service that they provide.

Noosentaal 16:39, 12 November 2007 (UTC)


[edit] Disambiguation

  • Added this page to the Black Hawk disambiguation page to make it easier to search for.

Noosentaal 10:40, 13 November 2007 (UTC)