Talk:Black Mama, White Mama

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This needs a total rewrite, it's very much not in a neutral, NPOV, encyclopedic tone... for example:

"Of course being a Women In Prision flick, we're not 10 minutes into the film before we get at least one good ogle at all the leading ladies naughty bits in a communal shower sequence. Being the troublemakers that they are, Pam and Karen get thrown into The Oven (topless, of course) to sweat out the day under the blazing sun"

Not the right tone at all. Xmoogle (talk) 18:10, 27 February 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Copyvio?

This article changed enormously in this one edit by an IP. Googling for the text doesn't show it up, but it sure smells of copyvio to me. Anyone have any encyclopedias of exploitation movies on their bookshelves? If so, look up this movie in it. Morenoodles (talk) 08:09, 1 June 2008 (UTC)