Talk:Big-Bang Cannon

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The reason I tagged this article non-NPOV is mostly due to the first sentence. If noone objects, I'd like to rephrase that first sentence somewhat... more to come. MagnusW 07:19, 13 April 2007 (UTC)

Thank you. Corrected first sentence to state that product is still manufactured to this day while still maintaining the unique quality of the item and company within a historical American toy context. Hopefully this clears issue up.--Davidjohn2006 18:38, 20 April 2007 (UTC)

Actually, my main argument was that the entire wording of the first paragraph is non-NPOV and not substantiated by anything else than links to the manufacturer's website. I'm inclined to remove most of the first paragraph if no one objects within, say, a week. MagnusW 19:48, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
Edited first paragraph. Concentrated on factual reason for product's (company's) origin. Also, removed link and corrected wording to read "consumer fireworks." All facts are supported by book (see "References") which has references to articles and interviews. Please advise if any further changes necessary to meet non-NPOV guidelines. Thank you.Davidjohn2006 19:35, 31 May 2007 (UTC)