Talk:Bermuda Syndrome

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[edit] A good start...

The article has a good start, but the writing is redundant. I recommend less use of pronouns, as this can easily improve the writing's style and tone. A bit more content could help too, but for the most part, the article is quite good. --Cremepuff222 (talk, review me!) 00:30, 15 March 2007 (UTC)

It´s been a year, I know, but what do you mean by "the writing is redundant"? And sorry, that was all the content I could come up with, haven´t played the game in years, so I don´t remember plot details. You are welcome to add to it if you have, though.Threedots dead (talk) 23:12, 15 January 2008 (UTC)