Talk:Barry M. Costello
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A beautiful opening sentence - immediately tells the reader the most important/significant thing they need to know about the subject. And I thank you for not writing about his position on the high school football team or anything equivalently trivial. Still, most of the rest of the article reads like a resume. It's a lot better than some of the stuff I've seen, but could use some work. Thanks. LordAmeth 09:49, 27 February 2007 (UTC)
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