Talk:Ashley Erinn Harder
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[edit] Improving the article
Please be careful. This article looks mostly like a self published advertisement. If you are the subject and author you need to be aware of WP:COI as well as other WP policies. You should also make sure that the article contains reliable third party sources. Thanks. Jasynnash2 (talk) 08:45, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
Reliable third party sources added. Not an Autobiography, but a biography from a very close friend, and huge fan.
- Just trying to help here so please bear with me. 1) The references you have put into the article seem to be duplicated. You have "^ http://www.jeanpaulcorbeil.com/ " three times, " http://www.umm.ca/CFLgirls.php" three times, and "^ http://www.financialpost.com/Story.html?id=119624" three times, plus others. 2) I'd suggest editing the print work section so it seems less C.V. like, maybe calling it in print and only including:
Maxim Magazine - July '07 - "Harder She Comes" Wedding Bells Magazine - (issue?) - feature title maybe Men's Urban Magazine - April '07 - feature title maybe UMM Magazine[14] - Spring '08 - feature title maybe
3) I'd double check the WP: Reliable Sources policy and make sure the above conform to that. 4) I'd work on finding away to address the fact that not alot can be found about the subject on Google (as it is one of the places othe people will check to verify notability and such). 5) checkout the guideline for model articles as well and maybe review some of the articles on here for people of similar occupation to the subject. 6)I'd remove the "and infamous socialite, best known for her "It Girl" status on the L.A social scene." portion from the lead. 7) I'd find a picture to put in the article that meets the Wiki policies (just in case she is someone that people will recognise but, don't know the name of).
There may be more that can be done to improve the article but, I'm out of ideas at the moment.
8) try contributing constructively to other parts of Wiki so that any "bias" concerns may be lessened (and because it can be quite fun helping out sometimes)
Jasynnash2 (talk) 13:51, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
I have loads of pictures of Ashley that I've been trying to upload, but I can't. Does anyone know why? Or explain to me how.. I've read the FAQ's I don't find them to be very clear. —Preceding unsigned comment added by J.K.yidding (talk • contribs) 21:50, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
P.S There is no "explaining", "refferencing" or "proving" Ashley... she's just known. You have to be in L.A to understand, the girl was an icon. Beleive me, she belongs in an encyclopedia... she's like Edie Sedgwick without drugs or a need to ride on an artist's coat-tails. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.79.131.99 (talk) 01:21, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
