Talk:Ascentium
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Cleanup areas for this article:
- NPOV -- reads like a press release. "one of the world’s leading" is bad -- who says? Is there a citation for this? This is non-neutral language.
- be more clear about what the company does. What exactly is "technologically enabled digital experiences"? Web design? something else? Wikipedia is not written for industry, it's written for the general public.
- needs to be wikified & linked to other articles
- needs to be dated -- "currently" is bad, as the article will date (currently when?)
- Needs citations. How do we know who their clients are? Or when they were founded? Was this written by an employee? Even if factually correct, still needs citations for verification. The company website is not good enough; need outside citations too.
- See the advice in Wikipedia:Guide_to_writing_better_articles re: tone & style.
Also see: notability for organizations & companies -- talks about citations.
