Talk:Arundel Castle/Comments

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I think that this article should apply for an official GA status but the following comments will need to be considered first:

  • Apart from the IOE reference, the article lacks any citations. There should be a least one per paragraph. see WP:CITE
  • I suggest merging the important events section into the relevant history sections, otherwise the section may attract trivia. see WP:TRIVIA
  • The red link for Mary FitzAlan needs investigating. Is there a Mary FitzAlan article under a different heading? Should a stub be created for Mary FitzAlan? Should Mary FitzAlan be wikilinked?
  • The external links need to be reviewed. One is the local radio, not connected with the castle. Another seems to require a login and password.
  • It is recommended not to specify thumbnail picture sizes as this overrides the user defined option. A defined size for the lead picture is accepted, but the remainder should go to default. see Wikipedia:MOS#Image_size
  • See the automated peer review for some more Manual of style comments. MortimerCat (talk) 00:48, 14 April 2008 (UTC)