Wikipedia:Article assessment/Extinct mammals/Australopithecus
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Assessment  |
| Extinct mammals |
| Assessment completed 27 February 2006 – 5 March 2006 |
| Assessments |
| Aurochs Australopithecus |
Assessment of an article under the topic Extinct mammals.
Article: Australopithecus
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[edit] Review by Martin Walker
- Coverage and factuality: 5
- Rather narrow in scope, I'd like to see some more biology aspects that do not directly relate to evolution of homo sapiens. Needs refs.
- Writing style: 6
- A little dry, so hard to read in places (Note: I'm not familiar with the topic).
- Structure: 6
- I'd like to see more sections, but that may relate to the narrow scope (see above)
- Aesthetics: 8
- I liked the pictures a lot, and the two boxes are great.
- Overall: 6
Martin Walker 22:43, 28 February 2006
[edit] Review by violet/riga
- Coverage and factuality: 5
- Looks at evolution, but has very few details about Australopithecus. Very poor referencing.
- Writing style: 4
- Does not grab attention and leaves the reader with confusion.
- Structure: 4
- Not a natural order; poorly structured; horribly short lead.
- Aesthetics: 7
- Two good images.
- Overall: 5
The article is very hard to read and poor in quite a few areas. violet/riga (t) 20:36, 3 March 2006 (UTC)
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