Talk:Amir Cyrus Ahanchian

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[edit] How should I rewrite?

This seems neutral. How should I rewite? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ebdick (talk • contribs)

It needs to read less like a resume and more like an encyclopedia article. Who is he, an American screenwriter (that's your first clause right there); if so, what films of his have been made and where did they go? Where did he come from before Enron? (And what did he do for them?) The article is full of external links, instead of links to information in Wikipedia. A scholarship doesn't make somebody notable; lose the fluff like that. Remember, if he isn't notable in the eyes of the world, he doesn't merit an article. --Orange Mike | Talk 18:01, 10 December 2007 (UTC)

It needs better sources too. Got any feature articles in newspapers or magazines? --Malcolmxl5 (talk) 00:21, 11 December 2007 (UTC)

The text is also poorly formatted, with lots of unexplained links to something-or-other on YouTube. We need some documentation. Are these films? Shorts? Unproduced scripts? (Who in Hollywood doesn't have those lying around?) Please clarify, source and improve. --Orange Mike | Talk 02:16, 11 December 2007 (UTC)

ACA wrote script for movie that had notable actors in it. I cleaned some stuff up and added a newspaper article. What else do you guys want? Ebdick (talk) 17:03, 11 December 2007 (UTC)