Talk:Alexander Kronrod/Comments

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Great work in expanding this today. Just a few points:

The 'Later in his life' para should be moved near the end of the bio section, so that it reads chronologically.

If you have access to the sources, the various achievements and events details should be dated.

Some copy editing would help in avoiding short sentences such as 'He tested the medicine on himself' or 'Kronrod helped to solve the general recursive search scheme'

Three of the last five sentances in the bio section are unconnected and should be integrated into the rest of the text. + Ceoil 23:30, 19 December 2006 (UTC)

And you might comply with WP:MOSHEAD + Ceoil 23:34, 19 December 2006 (UTC)

The quote that Kronrod gave ideas "away left and right, quite honestly being convinced that the authorship belongs to the one who implements them" is intriguing and points towards an interesting personality. Could this be expaned on? + Ceoil 23:59, 19 December 2006 (UTC)

• Ceoil, thanks for the incredibly prompt assessment. Your comments above have been incorporated (pretty much done). -Susanlesch 04:29, 23 December 2006 (UTC)

• Your welcome, although the article has improved dramatically since I made my assessment, and I notice it has since been upgraded. Just one thing though, do you know when began to develope 'milil'? When did he suffere his first stroke? Anyway + Ceoil 19:04, 23 December 2006 (UTC)

• From what little I have read, Landis and Yaglom offer no dates between 1968 and 1986. At this time I am limited to Internet resources but can try to find out at a library sometime. -Susanlesch 19:12, 23 December 2006 (UTC)