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[edit] Ga nom on hold
- I don't know if it is okay to do this, but is there a chance you could add rationale to the image for the Blackening and add the cover on here?
- A big no no. An article about songs should not use the cover of the album as outlined here. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 07:20, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
- wlink to "Best Metal Performance" (Grammy Award for Best Metal Performance)
- put the band template below the external links.
- I think that the link is important to the article so it can stay, but maby rename it to something like "Aesthetics of Hate: R.I.P. Dimebag Abbott, and Good Riddance" or something like that.
- That's all. I can't wait to see this in two weeks. Leave a note on my talk page when it is done. —Burningclean [Speak the truth!] 00:50, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Furthermore
- Pipe link Roadrunner Records to Roadrunner to remove "records" per guidelines.
- In the chronology field, enclose the titles in a parenthesis.
- Furious is POVic.
- Remove comma after February 2005
- Remove "for a Grammy Award". It is redundant since you mentioned "Grammy" already in "50th Grammy Award" and "Best Metal Performance" is obviously an award.
- "Writing" overlooks the whole section. Change to "background."
- The flow of the story in the first section is choppy. Re-arrange it.
- Change semi-colon to colon.
- Remove quotation marks in the quoted material (in Flynn's statement).
- In the attribution, just state Robb Flynn.
- The recording section is way too short; better merge to the preceding part.
- Change the double quotation of the title in Jurek's review to single quotation.
- The award thing again. Change it per fifth suggestion.
- Use colon after nomination.
- The article lacks the composition section and it somehow fails to comply the third criterion.
Feel free to object. Thanks. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 07:20, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. I don't want to merge background with recording because they very different sections. Regarding composition, there is no information available, which is why i am only taking this article to GA, as it would fail as an FA without that section-i didn't think a section is necessary for GA. M3tal H3ad (talk) 08:42, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
- Welcome. Anyway, I was just concerned on the third criterion. This article is about a song. Hope someone can find info about the composition someday. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 01:08, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
- Passed
- Good work. Wanna try FA? --BritandBeyonce (talk) 00:35, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
- If information on composition/structure becomes available i might. Thanks for the help. M3tal H3ad (talk) 04:33, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
- Always welcome. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 06:10, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
