Talk:A. J. Wright

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Good article A. J. Wright was one of the Social sciences and society good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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[edit] GA

Good article and well sourced, I'd advise adding a fair use rationale to the image however, I don't see this as a reason to fail however and thus passed the page. thanks/Fenton, Matthew Lexic Dark 52278 Alpha 771 20:39, 22 February 2007 (UTC)

[edit] GA sweeps (delisted)

In order to uphold the quality of Wikipedia:Good articles, all articles listed as Good articles are being reviewed against the GA criteria as part of the GA project quality task force. While all the hard work that has gone into this article is appreciated, unfortunately, as of February 2,

2008, this article fails to satisfy the criteria, as detailed below. For that reason, the article has been delisted from WP:GA. However, if improvements are made bringing the article up to standards, the article may be nominated at WP:GAN. If you feel this decision has been made in error, you may seek remediation at WP:GAR. Ruslik (talk) 19:08, 2 February 2008 (UTC)

The reasons:

1) The lead is not satisfactory. It should only summarize the article. However it also contains information, which is not mentioned in the main text.

2) The article consists only of one section—'History', which basicaly says where and wnen stores have been opened and closed. However the article should contain several section: History, The company, Future, end so on. History section, for instance, should tell the reader when the company was founded, who founded it, how it has been growing since then. In the present form the article is simply not comprehensive.

Ruslik (talk) 19:08, 2 February 2008 (UTC)