User talk:86.143.19.22

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Appreciate author comments of work to be done. Here are additional insights.

The definition is incomprehensible on first read; clear understanding of a definition is a basic requirement. In a spirit of respectful discourse, please, author, present your next edition to at least two laypersons to confirm that it makes sense. Also, again in a spirit of respectful discourse, if your updated definition is still regarded as challenging, consider collaborating with a professional writer. Your skills in economics may not extend to lexicography (this is in no way intended to be an insult).

If this term describes a truly complex concept, the definition should state so directly, followed by maximum simplification/clarification. If this term is intentionally obscurantist or subtle, state so.

Please again note that the above is presented in a spirit of constructive criticism.