User talk:76.185.201.244

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[edit] Your edits to RMS Titanic

You should go back and copyedit your changes; I see several typos (recieved, postel, approximetly, whichi, teh, approximetly, whtie), and a statement that really needs a citation ("Had they spotted the iceberg 10 seconds later or 10 seconds earlier or even had simply hit it straight on, the ship likely would not have foundered."). -- Jim Douglas (talk) (contribs) 01:41, 5 November 2006 (UTC)

Please slow down and check your work more carefully. That last edit has another two typos and another statement that needs a citation. -- Jim Douglas (talk) (contribs) 01:48, 5 November 2006 (UTC)