User talk:71.132.21.184

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Your recent edits to a variety of pages, including illegal immigration, Erik Erikson and John Birch were reverted on the basis of WP:NPOV. I would like to remind you that All Wikipedia articles must be written from a neutral point of view, representing views fairly and without bias. Wikipedia is no place to push your agenda, there are other outlets for that. Please keep your edits to Wikipedia cited and non-speculative. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me, or explore the project. ••\\/\//esleyPinkha//\/\\•• 08:05, 25 April 2006 (UTC)

Regarding Erik Erikson: I see where the confusion came up. The edit I saw changed communist influence to communist infiltration. This edit, by itself uses Weasel words to imply a bias against Communism.
Regarding Illegal Immigration: While your initial statement from the DOJ and LAPD may be valid, your other edits are neither sourced nor neutral. Many of the points you make are valid, the cost of healthcare has riven significantally, at least partially due to illegal immigration. However, bringing up welfare benefits implies a pre-conceived intent to hurt the state by having children (or having children simply for an economic benefit). Your edit regarding the Lil' Cycos gang is also irrelevant to the article, although I see the connection you were trying to make.
Regarding John Birch, both your edit and the edit that was previously there show signs of difficulties with NPOV as you said. On that particular point, however, I think that bringing it up on the Talk page may be the best way to go about changing that. Thank you for your contributions, I really hope that you will continue to edit the Wikipedia. Please look over policies on Weasel Words and its related articles. Please, feel free to contact me as much as you'd like. I'm sorry for perhaps moving to quickly and not talking out some of your edits with you. Happy editing! ••\\/\//esleyPinkha//\/\\•• 09:19, 25 April 2006 (UTC)