User talk:68.54.62.158

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[edit] February 2008

Welcome to Wikipedia, and thank you for your contributions. One of the core policies of Wikipedia is that articles should always be written from a neutral point of view. A contribution you made to Rob Grill appears to carry a non-neutral point of view, and your edit may have been changed or reverted to correct the problem. Please remember to observe our core policies. Thank you. You appear to be deleting sourced biographic material on the ground that it is not flattering to Grill. This is not justifiable under Wikipedia's Neutral Point of View policy. Wikipedia is not censored. / edg ☺ ☭ 04:56, 24 February 2008 (UTC)

Please reply in Talk:Rob Grill#Ownership issues in this article. / edg ☺ ☭ 05:01, 24 February 2008 (UTC)

Also, per Wikipedia's Manual of style, "bass guitar" is not a proper noun. This should be in lower case. Since Wikipedia articles begin with an initial capital letter, the word "Bass" may optionally be capitalized, but guitar is not unless it is part of a name. / edg ☺ ☭ 05:04, 24 February 2008 (UTC)