Talk:2007 Kansas City Chiefs season
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[edit] GA Review
Hi, I'm your GA reviewer. I saw that this article has really been up here for a long time at WP:GAN, so I'm finally going to give this article the assessment it deserves.
It's a very well sourced article, but I do have some concerns with it. First off, none of the prose for each game has any citations. Now, I can see the tables next to them have citations, so maybe you can reuse the reference again and just note the reference one more time, maybe at the end of each segment of prose for each game for clarification.
I've got some concerns with the opening paragraph as well, and I think you should cite more of the statements there. It's not too poorly written, though.
Also, the offseason "Team Additions" and "Departures" subsections are embedded lists and need to be dealt with. You'll need to turn them into prose, which shouldn't be all that hard to do, but don't just delete all the returns and reuse "On such and such a date", etc.
The biggest problem I have is the number of dead links. Using this tool, I found 31 dead links. That means 31 of your sources are actually not citing anything now.
You've got a lot of work to do, and I don't think you're going to be able to get this done in one week, especially not replacing the dead links. I'm sorry, but I have to fail this article. If you wish to have the article reassessed, you can do so at WP:GAR, and if you have questions or comments, contact me on my talk page. Thanks. Red Phoenix (Talk) 02:43, 9 April 2008 (UTC)

