Talk:2007 Bahrain Grand Prix

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2007 Bahrain Grand Prix was a good article nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There are suggestions below for improving the article. Once these are addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake. Reviewed version: June 3, 2007

To-do list for 2007 Bahrain Grand Prix:	edit · history · watch · refresh
Here are some tasks you can do: Cleanup: References in #Qualifying Expand: Lead section to include pre-race championship situation, qualifying, new developments, consequences/impact of GP Other: Improve referencing. As Blnguyen said, "Race report also has stuff not in the references."

[edit] GAC notes and requests

• The lead is not satisfactory, because half of the lead is about practice, and the other half says who the winner was, but nothing is mentioned of qualifying. The lead should tell us briefly what was the championship situation going into the race, any new major developments since the last race (if applicable), and should tell us which car was superior over the weekend and who was on pole and a brief verdict on the nature of the race and its impact on the championship (eg team leaders Alonso and Raikkonen losing to their teammates, not being able to assert their superiority etc, championship tied etc).
• The qualifying section has problems, since not all of the info is covered in the report reference. BBC should have a minute by minute report
• Race report also has stuff not in the references. BCC would have more detail. We should have some reaction and analysis on how MAssa and Hamilton outperforming Raikkonen and Alonso would change the environment within their teams; what the race tells us about the relative strenght of Ferrari and McLaren etc. Also there is some inconsistency, with Kubica not being mentioned but some lower placed drivers being mentioned. Also the race report should be more detailed and explain how the battle between MAssa and Hamilton evolved, among other things. Blnguyen (bananabucket) 03:09, 25 May 2007 (UTC)

I have failed this article for GA as there has been no response to the above since it was posted or edits to the article. Please feel free to resubmit for GA if/when all issues have been addressed. PanthersGirl 19:44, 3 June 2007 (UTC)