Talk:1968 Pacific hurricane season

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Good work for the most part. I'll give it B, but there are some things to be fixed before sending it off the GAN. First, the lead sentence needs to be more interesting. At the moment it just states the obvious. Also, I see numerous hyphens in the lead that need to be replaced by spaced en dashes (–) or unspaced em dashes (—). There are some other MoS breaches, as well. A copyedit wouldn't hurt, but the prose is generally pretty good. Cheers, Juliancolton ^{Tropical Cyclone} 22:59, 6 June 2008 (UTC)