Talk:1968 Democratic National Convention protests
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I moved this lengthy, um, treatise from the 1968 Democratic National Convention article to here. It is really too long for a section and needs to be cleaned up. It probably also should be cut down to a more encyclopedic entry. I wish someone luck in doing so. PerlKnitter (talk) 19:35, 29 January 2008 (UTC)
This article reads essentially as an apologia for the Daley administration. It's failure to adhere to NPOV is breathtaking. Acsenray (talk) 20:52, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
This entire page needs to be redone. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.254.105.37 (talk) 15:09, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
I've tried to remove the most spectacular violations of NPOV and replace them with more neutral language. The "conclusions" section, however, is little more than, to quote Acsenray, "an apologia for the Daley administration", and I thus deleted it.Tintagel555 (talk) 22:36, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Really needs help
I just started reading it, and in the first paragraph "Somewhere in the drug induced haze, it was suggested to have a free music festival in Chicago to defuse all the political tensions" is written. Now, I'm not denying it's true, but seriously... —Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.150.31.81 (talk) 03:59, 11 March 2008 (UTC)
