Talk:Axis & Allies (2004 video game)
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[edit] VG Assessment
This is in regards to the request at the VG Assessment page. I'm rating this article as Start-class, Low-importance. Here are a few tips to improve it!
First off, the lead needs to be expanded, but most of all, the entire formatting of the sections is nuts. Right no it's a stub Gameplay section, followed by Single Player, which is broken up into a game-guidish RTS subsection, a WWII subsection, and a campaign subsection, then Multiplayer, Map editor and demo sections. It should be Gameplay, with a description of the difs between RTS and turn-based, then much shorter WWII, campaign, random battle, and multiplayer sections, though I'm not sure those can't be combined together. Then, a developement section, where you can shove a sentence or two about the map editor, then a reception section. No demo section. Please see any video game Good Article or Featured Article for some ideas of what this should look like, right now it's a pretty weak start-class. --PresN 23:27, 28 May 2007 (UTC)

